In the Dark
Man, I'm lost in music,
I lose myself up on that stage,
It's bliss.
I'm kept up thinking of ways to be better,
I have a fire burning inside,
I have to make it.
Pieces of myself have been lost since that day,
You made me break my own rules,
You made me care too much,
I don't know how this ends.
They said I wanted too much attention,
That really paralyzed me.
Maybe the stage is just a desperate ploy for happiness,
Maybe I'm broken,
But aren't we all?
I really like how you express your love for music in this poem, describing it as something as crucial for you as the air that we breath.
ResponderBorrarI think this poem is written with honesty and bravery.I enjoyed how you exposed a part of us humans that maybe we don't talk about...that darkness or simply that part that we don't want others to find out about. I think the song "Demons" exposes that perfectly. Great choice and staggering poem!
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